Topic: [Standard] B/W Life gain

1st: ignore the sideboard, i usually dont play with a sideboard. Cards in there are ones i try out every once in a while.

2nd: just looking for some feedback, any ideas would be much appreciated.

https://deckbox.org/sets/788301

Re: [Standard] B/W Life gain

70 cards with only 24 lands is not an ideal spell to land ratio.
I've been working on a similar idea.   I haven't tested it or gone beyond just a first build of ideas.   But feel free to take a look.

https://deckbox.org/sets/802413

Re: [Standard] B/W Life gain

Your deck is heavily inconsistent, you want to keep your total number of cards at 60 not counting your sideboard. In addition try not have to many 1 or 2 off cards. Here a list I threw together: https://deckbox.org/sets/808488