Just built this it's my first RL deck. I have been playing duels online for awhile now so I have some knowledge any help would be appreciated. http://deckbox.org/sets/460276
what's your plans with the deck, casual? fnm? Do you play multiplayer games?
Don't know your budget or other details so, i'm going to advise without considering budget or play setting. Assuming you're playing 1 on 1 games.
Right off some things I see are lands as an issue. You need more of them and better ones. Shocks are good, Watery Graves. Even some gates would help. You really need a couple nephalia drownyards for a mill deck right now and I wouldn't run less than 24-25 land.
A little more solid removal, like far/away, murder, dimir charm is also very good. You also need some more draw utility. Think twice and/or thought scour is good. Pilfered plans can also do in a pinch ,but the instant draw is better. I would also recommend a board wipe like mutilate or even cyclonic rift. You can remove some of the artifacts or creatures to fit these spells in.
A couple planes walkers would help also, a couple Jace, Architect of Thought and Jace, Memory Adept. Also something like consuming aberration would help.