http://deckbox.org/sets/467800
http://deckbox.org/sets/459628

Just trying to get a little feedback on my current 2 playable decks. I'm wondering what I could do to tweak either of them. I just played my friend with the black mono against his slivers and went 7-0, the only problem being when he managed to pull out a protection from color of your choice sliver.

I'd like to find a phyrexian obliterator for the mono black and maybe another time warp for the blue,

anyways critisize away.

cheeers

Hi!

First deck:

- Consider change the Unsummon for Vapor Snag, is the same but with 1 life loss. If 9/10 times you use unsummon in enemys creatures, Vapor Snag is better.
- Rite of Replication if you want for the kicker effect (but 9 manas is too much in my opinion) ok but if only want for her copy effect, you have better options.

Anyway, need more context of the way(s) you want to win with this deck.

The second deck i see too much high CMC creatures, maybe add some Dark Rituals. About the part you say:

"the only problem being when he managed to pull out a protection from color of your choice sliver."

Remember the "DEBT" about protection: can't be Damaged, Enchanted/Equipped, Blocked, Targeted. That means if you problem is when he gets protection (from black) you need to use ways without target and damage. For example the mutilate: don't target (apply to all creatures) and don't do damage (-1/-1 is not damage) so with mutilate you can kill creatures with protection from black.

oh good one on the vapor, i'll get that changed. Also I usually sneak a gilded lotus in my deck, i kind of alternate it through all my decks. I guess the point is to keep the defense up with the fog's and such until i get to big mana to 5 kick the roron something of his that's huge.

sorry im sorta new, What is a cmc creature? converted mana cost? like to many 6 bombs? It actually works out pretty good with the lifelink and the 4 nighthawks. feel free to suggest any swap in's outs