Personally, I think you're trying to go two different ways with your creatures, but you need to pick one and run with it.
You don't have enough zombies to guarantee that you have some to make
Gravecrawler worthwhile, and less than half your creatures would be pumped by the
Stromkirk Captain, because they aren't Vampires. Not saying that you can't mix the two in some ways, but it seems like you should lean more towards one of them if you plan on having cards that utilize that fact, or drop those cards to go with a more straight aggro strategy. For example,
Falkenrath Aristocrat is pretty big finisher in BR that you could really benefit from. And if you're just going for straight Aggro, then
Hellrider could be pretty great as well.
Also,
Rakdos, Lord of Riots is awesome, but you currently only have 2 creatures in the whole deck that will actually benefit from his cost decrease ability. How about something like
Carnival Hellsteed; nothing like a miracled Bonfire for 4 into a 6/5 haste, first strike for 2 mana.
Also, with so many low cost creatures, you're going to play yourself out of a hand very quickly, so you'll probably want some type of card draw in there.
Bloodgift Demon might fit nicely in that spot and can also benefit from Rakdos' ability.