First things first. Lands are crucial. Get more Godless Shrines and try to get some
Isolated Chapels. You have several cards that cost two black, and you don't wanna get stuck with white mana.
I'd probably swap the unburial rites for
Immortal Servitude as a lot of your creatures share casting costs. You could hypothetically return 8 creatures to the field for six mana. Not too shabby.
Tainted Sigil also pairs nicely with the Vizkopa Guildmage. Also,
Rhox Faithmender doubles the effect, and is a great blocker. Also,
Blood Artist should not be overlooked.
Now into the older stuff.
Serra Ascendant can replace that 1/1 lifelinker.
Martyr of Sands gets real stupid with this build. There's others, but I'm too sleep deprived to think of them.