- Glen Elendra gets -1/-1 counters, so it won't work with Sage of Fables. You need the biomancers to make that work.
- Rhystic Study is really easy to get around and, as long as the opponent is willing to pay 1 more for their spells, you draw nothing.
- Prime Speaker Zegana will almost always be rather large and being able to draw 4+ cards is pretty solid... even if they remove her, you've gotten the benefit out of her.
- As for the evasion, if you're doing things right, your stuff should be big enough that you don't need evasion. You can go through their stuff.
- Mirrorweave won't transfer counters, although it would be funny to target Kalonian Hydra and attack with 3-4 creatures...
- The list is a bit better, but I think it would be best to focus in more on the key strategy and make the list tighter and more consistent. I think you can pull most of the proliferate stuff in exchange for more card draw and/or removal options.