Desire -- refocus this deck so it focuses on:

2-x turns -- spells, draws
(ideal play pattern would be something like 'dualcast' > 'magma opus')
ral planeswalker cards (look, I think he's hot) + proliferate
combat

Actually, this is cool.
Main wincon: big burn spell, doubled; combat damage
Alt wincon: sphinx-bone wand (treasure mage to fetch?)
Alt-alt wincon: planeswalker ults

avoid 'storm'-style finishers:
for example: instead of thousand-year storm, Swarm Intelligence or Double Vision