I have the other two paired down versions that aproximated down, but the lists didn't feel complete. I decided to rebuild a version from the ground up so that I at least had a full theoretical grip of my card choices. I've gotten the following list, and i'm confident of these cards being correct with some flexibility in A trophy and and the ratio of fetchland split. The final decisions are more difficult, and don't seem intuitive. My build features more card disadvantage in archive trap/surgical but is somewhat mitigated by not being to cast all our spells anyway and into the story. Still, it would be advantageous to feature some amount of serum visions, archmages charm, and esper charm to have more options and card flow. Astrolabe also fits this category, and determines some build options. The number of cantrips also affects land count and remaining land choices. Featuring a 1 of main board catch up mechanism is also desirable after seeing SB fail, and gaze of granite actually might be subtly the bomb, as we can pretty much nuke the board at 6, but the mana cost is deep, and we sacrifice labe's in the process. There are other less all in options. The last piece is how many lifegain spells we can afford, and which ones. I have a suspicion that if we can fit guile in the deck without having to double fetch/shock for it it might be over the top powerful in conjunction with the rest of our set up.